This series of one-hour, online, advanced writing courses offers a fast-paced, intuitive experience, filled with animated lessons and exercises that will make you a better writer.
Kinder introduces a whole new system for quickly spotting problems, many of which you never knew existed. He explains the ideas simply, illustrates them graphically, then has you edit exercises culled from opinions, briefs, memoranda, letters, and contracts. When you're finished, he gives you immediate feedback.
No matter how good your writing, you will discover new ideas for improving it.
In Part III of the series, Kinder shows you how to arrange sentences for forward movement. He does not waste your time talking about grammar; you already know how to write grammatically. The problem is grammatical doesn't mean good. You still have to clear away other obstacles that frequently impede your readers. Kinder describes them for you and shows you how to untangle your sentences so the reader can move quickly through what you have written.
This highly acclaimed program has been awarded U.S. Patent No. 7,313,513. Other patents pending.